Was alright, i see where you could think it could be a song. To be completely honest, i felt like you kept the same general lead notes/patterns throughout the whole song. As a fun little improv its not bad but for a song it's way to.... improv. If that makes any sense haha.

Try screwing around with different voicing and patterns for leads, go outside of that 'box' of notes.
Personally I liked it, but the speakers I'm listening to on this computer are not the best, so it was a little more muffled than it would normally be. It was sort of repetitive in some spots, but I still liked it overall, and there were a couple of nice licks in there. The recording quality obviously needs some work, it makes it difficult to tell what exactly is going on. Overall though, not bad man. Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1578985