Hail
i'm a mean bully
Join date: Jan 2010
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#2
no
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evolucian
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Join date: Jul 2008
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#3
Difficult to say. Would you like a yes? If so.. I'll consider it if you have another song
CNC-Digity
Truck drivin bassist
Join date: Aug 2006
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#4
Where is the metal?
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Drekkenbrein
Join date: Nov 2008
127 IQ
#5
You already made a thread about your terrible song.
Simper-Yut
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Join date: May 2012
352 IQ
#6
OP, you come across as a bit of an attention *****. Fake humility in the title doesn't disguise the fact that you are seeking kudos and accolades as opposed to actual criticism. The "I'm only such and such age" is always a dead give away.

The song in question isn't appealing to my ears, but not terrible either.
MaggaraMarine
Slapping the bass.
Join date: Oct 2009
3,411 IQ
#7
No... Not this guy again...

You need to start from somewhere. If your attitude is "I'm never going to learn how to write songs", you'll never going to learn how to write them. But I would advise you to use real instruments when you record the songs. It doesn't sound really good.

But every songwriter has to write their first song and you can't expect it to be the best song in the world. You should never give up if you want to be a songwriter, just write a new song. And songwriting is not about talent. Nothing is. Everybody can do everything if they want to do it. Some people can do it easier, yes, but that doesn't mean you can't do it after practicing. And really nobody can write a perfect song as their first song. You can't do anything without practicing. Nobody was perfect when they were born.

You are only 15 so you have plenty of time to write some good songs.

But what you really need to do is to fix your attitude.
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amonamarthmetal
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#8
omg sooo good i kry evrytym... dont hate on this guy hes so talent like my hero justin beaner.
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Mathedes
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#9
Mozart was composing symphonies since 9 years old. So no, you aren't cut out to be a songwriter.
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JimmyCraig
Dazed and Confounded
Join date: Feb 2012
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#10
Yeah dude why don't instead of inflating your ego you get better at writing songs
mikeYekim
Curses & Cranberries!!
Join date: Aug 2009
414 IQ
#11
you guys are a bunch of haters!

*EDIT* Ok, some parts sound like the intro to a B horror movie, and some parts sound like the intro to a gameboy pocket game or something.

To be honest it felt like the was no main point to your song, or at least you gave away the point within the first few seconds. It was 4 minutes of the same thing :P
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griffRG7321
Theory buff
Join date: Sep 2007
999 IQ
#12
I wrote 30 symphonies when I was 3 years old, I beat steve vai in a guitar duel when I was 11 and I just won an oscar for a film I scored.

Btw I'm only 15 guize.
MaggaraMarine
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#13
Quote by mikeYekim
you guys are a bunch of haters!

*EDIT* Ok, some parts sound like the intro to a B horror movie, and some parts sound like the intro to a gameboy pocket game or something.

To be honest it felt like the was no main point to your song, or at least you gave away the point within the first few seconds. It was 4 minutes of the same thing :P

You haven't seen this guys' other threads? He posted six threads about this song (and talked about killing himself). TS has some real problems. Also he posted a thread about his singing skills...

BTW. My 1000th post!!!
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IbanezMan989
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#14
If that is really you, yes i enjoy your music and keep doing it.
rockingamer2
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#15
I can't really say anything without knowing where you're trying to go. This is the wrong forum for it anyway, go to the Original Recordings forum.
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