celitus
Baroque and roll
Join date: Sep 2009
1,554 IQ
#1
Hey

I went back to remix my EP with some new techniques and was wondering if I could get some feedback on the new mix and the song itself

The new mix can be found at https://soundcloud.com/jc123/once-upon-a-time-2013

and the original (and a download of the whole EP) can be found at http://download.gatexiii.co.uk
DreamGate
Heshmuggah
Join date: Feb 2011
259 IQ
#2
Hi, very nice track here. The melodies are nice. The vocals seem a little too loud or a little to away from the rest of the band. A little compression would've done good. Especially with the male voices that come in, a little vox efx would've done well. The guitar intro was sweet just that the starting was quite abrupt and that pinch was a little sloppy. Oh and that brush at the end could have been erased or over done with.
As it is symphonic, the synthesiser or keyboard could've been louder (although i reckoin it could just be the vocals overshadowing it) and the rhythm guitar would sound a little thicker and denser.
All in all a good song, just a series of master mixing would do well to make it a better listen.

It would be nice if you could take a peek at my song and leave a comment here
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1579867

thanks