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ha ha funny
Join date: Oct 2006
725 IQ
#1
you know,
i don’t spend entire nights anymore
missing her relentless smile
or her igneous eyes.

(i used to staple my fingers
to her terracotta hair,
wishing for some sort of blood to show.)

sometimes, i let it sit with me,
just for a moment,
while i pawn some of my balance
for another bottle.
sometimes i even get so dizzy
i fall into the wine,
wishing she and i would float away
in the brawling brine.

but you know,
just for a little while.
Totallynottommy
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2012
77 IQ
#2
'her igneous eyes' - That's an incredible lyric!
These are great lyrics! Perhaps write a bit more of it?