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Join date: Apr 2010
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good cover dude. its always good to add your own stuff into covers. one thing Id recommend you work on is your vibrato because its way too fast. work on a slower vibrato, then after you got that work on adding some vibrato to bends. just my tips, great cover though.
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Join date: Dec 2012
274 IQ
Thank you very much! That's just the sort of criticism I'm looking for. Just for someone to point out things that need working on. Thank you again, much appreciated!