Hi, i'm writing some music for my band to try and break the 4/4 fascination with the drummer, but I am only average when it comes to writing drum parts, me not playing drums much.
I was wondering if anyone here in this songwriting forum could give it a shot. There are already some drum parts there, but they are more as guidelines than anything.
Please mute the vocal parts because they were written by a friend and incomplete on my copy.
Song can be downloaded here

You know what would be really sweet? Having a beautiful bird inlaid around the first fret, taking a majestic dump with airborne droppings around the 5th, 7th, 9th frets and so on, with a graceful impact around the 22nd-24th.