DancesWithSheep
Muchacho Moderno
Join date: Dec 2012
114 IQ
#2
Nice and mellow, kinda like the chorusy intro.

0:39 - Like the weird vocal stylings

1:10 - Cops came by to stop my suicide attempt!

1:40 - My dog began to sob. I like the vocal stylings here

I can hear a base line in my head - would fill it out.

The vocals hold my attention, but the angsty lyrics are a little tough to swallow.

Keep on writing and recording!

Give a look at mine and kick my balls in return.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1583381

DWS
aaron aardvark
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2010
5,077 IQ
#3
tunasband,
Sorry about the heartache. Sometimes writing these sort of songs can be cathartic. Vibrato on the vocals is pretty intense, though it fits the mood, I suppose. Guitar sounds pretty good. Wish there wasn't the background noise, but not a big deal. Sad songs are not typically my favorites, though it's pretty good for that type of song. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1581578