Ometh
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#1
I started working on this today and I'm pretty happy with what I have: at least I like it better than my other experimental songs, but I'm stuck and I'm not shure how to continue it, or if I should at all. Gimme some insights and maybe a nice edit if you care enough, and I'll collab with you if I like what you did

EDIT: Done biatchez, I updated the file and also posted a MIDI and GP4 version
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#2
Dat pretty coo'

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Ometh
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You didn't answer any of my questions, you meanie poo
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Ometh
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#4
I has some new ideas, i shall update the file and post it l8r

also eip u didnt gimme anything to crt back

EDIT: done
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Ometh
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Was there a purpose behind this at all besides giving people anxiety?

Uhm, what? And how about a nice constructive crit, instead of a half assed question?
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roaraudio
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#7
I can see what that guy means by anxiety. It's very discordant - which i think is pretty cool. I can picture this being recorded and it would be prettttty full on sonically.
Although the section between 42 and 58 (bars) really let me take a breathe.

Pretty solid some of the riffs i really dug and i am by no means a huge fan of the metalz.
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#8
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Uhm, what? And how about a nice constructive crit, instead of a half assed question?


Coming from you, that's actually hilarious.

There were some cool ideas in there, especially that part with the guitar stops and bass pops, but the drums were annoying. Over the top in many places. Also, after a while the dissonance gets annoying. Try changing things up, add some melody in there or something.

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xbitmetal
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Well I didn't like this shit at all.
First, your genre is called trollmetal. I hate that senseless dissonance .
But you had some nice ideas that had really some groove in it, but just focus sometimes to make good music instead of nosense..
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Coming from you, that's actually hilarious.

Lol I know rite
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There were some cool ideas in there, especially that part with the guitar stops and bass pops, but the drums were annoying. Over the top in many places. Also, after a while the dissonance gets annoying. Try changing things up, add some melody in there or something.

Lol, hence the mathcore-ish in the title. I tried to make it as atonal as possible in that regard. And I tend to make my drums pretty insane, so I'll give you that Can't get enough of MIDI blast beats yo.
And the melodic part goes a bit against what I was trying to do, but I see what you mean. Thats why I added the clean break. Thanks anyway, nice crit. Anything for me to crit back?

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Well I didn't like this shit at all.
First, your genre is called trollmetal. I hate that senseless dissonance .
But you had some nice ideas that had really some groove in it, but just focus sometimes to make good music instead of nosense..

Like I said before, that's pretty much what I was trying to accomplish here. I do enjoy my dissonance but I get it when people don't lol. And yes, it's pretty much nonsense musically: I don't know much theory but I tried to experiment with things a bit. Oh well. And about me creating a new genre: I was beaten to it by Gorguts and TDSP by roughly 15 years lol.
Hope I get some proper mathcore lovers to crit this song, or I'll be a sad panda.
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Thanks anyway, nice crit. Anything for me to crit back?


Most of my stuff is metalcore influenced so chances are you wouldn't want to ahaha Don't worry about it.
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Most of my stuff is metalcore influenced so chances are you wouldn't want to ahaha Don't worry about it.

I don't care: when I don't troll I like to actually help people. Srs.
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Stay classy Ometh, stay classy

So when are you making an album? I would imagine you have enough material
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Stay classy Ometh, stay classy

So when are you making an album? I would imagine you have enough material

3 songs of cray and this one is the only one I finished up.

but if I finished all of my material i'd have stuff for:

7 death metal records (EDIT:if I expanded every single idea into 3 minute songs, and if every album had 45 minutes)
1 grind record
then there's the anedonia ep that i haven't done anything with yet

so yeah lol.

EDIT: and was that a good crit or wut? ur messin with my mind bb
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EDIT: and was that a good crit or wut? ur messin with my mind bb


lol

This isn't really the type of stuff i listen to so it's hard for me to give a solid crit tbh, but it has some cool riffs and grooves, a recorded version will sound great.
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#17
I can't stand this style of music, I'm more an ultra produced Power/Symphonic kind of guy *plays guitar solo whilst flying on a dragon* But, I do like the slapped bass bit that happens on the riff starting on bar 23, I feel it gives it impact, I reckon it'd be ace if it was recorded and replaced with a very low synth to cover the bass frequencies a bit more. I feel this kind of music is at its best when recorded, so I hope you can record all of this one day!
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#18
The way the rhythmic and melodic flow go along is amazing, shows a true knack for songwriting. Tempo and rhythm changes are spectacular, drum tracks are as good as some I've wrote
Change ups are wonderful...
I think you've inspired me to get back into this. I like this style a lot.

The way the melody flows to constantly create tension and lead into the next part is amazing. My favorite part of the song is everything but the beginning, but I like it a lot too actually. This kind of reminds of Cephalic Carnage.
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#19
wtf is 23/16 lmfao
Nice work tho favourite bit is def bar 23 - bar 26
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Ometh
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wtf is 23/16 lmfao

I don't even know , I was so bored when I wrote this.
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#21
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Coming from you, that's actually hilarious.

yeah, i also found that funny, considering he took a lot of pop shots at one of my tabs. pot calling the kettle black? lol
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#22
That chromatic riff from bar 17 is sweet, and the end riff is awesome. Gets kind of self-indulgently noodly at the some parts though.