RisingForce1990
Droppin' Knowledge
Join date: Dec 2008
30 IQ
#1
I saw you sleeping
That cold December night
You looked so peaceful
Didn't want to cause you fright
My only regret, is that I didn't pat your head
My only regret, that I didn't sit beside your bed
My only regret, that our last conversation was a fight
My only regret, I didn't give you one last kiss goodnight

You, good sir, have not gone over to your friends house after a hard night of drinking to find 2 dudes passed out in the same room both holding their own flaccid cocks in hand, passed out, with porn on the tv.
Nilchii
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2009
21 IQ
#2
Right on. A few more verses, and you'd have a murder ballad.
Nothing to see here. Move along.
ALsMistress
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2013
10 IQ
#3
I agree with Nilchii. This looks like a good piece in the making Would love to see it expanded a bit...looking forward to it