nunu
An Ideal Revenge baby!
Join date: May 2005
1,482 IQ
#1
The title pretty much says it all. Just some chill music made with my acoustic guitar. Arctic monkeys feel to it like "despair in the departure lounge." Kind of grungy..

http://moism.bandcamp.com/track/goldencage

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chop74
Registered User
Join date: May 2012
25 IQ
#2
I like it. Keep it short, sometimes when you try to make a song a respectable length you just ruin it.
aaron aardvark
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2010
4,986 IQ
#3
nunu,
The higher pitch synth/guitar right before the first vocals has a harsh tone for my ears, but I'm sensitive to the sort of thing. I like the drums & the melodies & the vocals. I wouldn't mind if you did a copy & paste job to make the song longer because I think it's too short in my opinion: I wouldn't get bored, I don't think. I like it for the most part. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1586943
jdenmo
UnBanned
Join date: Jul 2012
847 IQ
#5
i really like the drums and how the guitar came in. the way the high scale pitch came in with the accompanying acoustic was sick. im not a big fan of the vocals as im not fond of that style of music but when you say "in a golden cage" it starts to sound more on-key and suits the music. i also like the fill shortly following it. overall, its a good song. sounds kind of like something 'gorillaz' would do

c4c my song? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1588042