GuitarGuy2387
One Funky Monk
Join date: Jul 2004
2,153 IQ
#4
Gotta boost up your voice or balance the guitar sound. Real hard to hear the lyrics. Definitely digging the chord progression though, sounds real nice.

You should post the lyrics on the video so ppl can hear/see them.
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SweetenerCorp
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2009
684 IQ
#5
Apologies for the crappy recording, heres the lyrics -


Well you said you loved me, you said you knew
But I can't trust anything about you
It's a wicked lie, a two faced truth
This game ain't one for the youth

So now go, out my door
I don't want to see your face no more
I gave it time, but time didn't help
I don't want to live in this hell no more

Well i'll not be seeing you, not today
In a month, a year, or more
I can't do this I know the truth
This game aint one for the youth

So now go, out my door
I don't want to see your face no more
I gave it time, but time didn't help
I don't want to live in this hell no more
jdenmo
UnBanned
Join date: Jul 2012
847 IQ
#6
Quote by fdsaevad
you would not survive jail lol


lmfaoo!

but hey man i listened to your song and you have a decent voice. the guitar paying rhythm is nice too. only problem is i cant really understand what your singing. i like the chords for the chorus though, there pretty nice. keep up the good work

c4c my song? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1588042