Feedback would be highly appreciated. First song I've written since I started playing guitar. It all might seem a bit dense, but I was recording with a G35 headset mic into FL Studio, and the microphone and guitar was all running through the one speaker.

Last edited by ironlac_ at Feb 13, 2013,
i liked the beginning man. its a bit off-beat but i like the chords you used. your voice is decent too but man, theres so much static in there. i see lots of potential, cause it was a nice catchy tune. youre voice is surprisingly impressive, a bit of a radiohead/powderfinger feel to it. overall, keep up the good stuff man! add some bass, drums, and record it better, and you'd have a really good song.

c4c my song? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1588042