shaundp
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2011
150 IQ
#1
Trapped in a corner
Waiting for your messiah
To free you from the bonds you built yourself

And for all we know
No one is coming
Betrayed by a lie you concocted in your head

To hell with it all
Rumors spurring hatred
Opinions portrayed as facts

Leave it alone
Prodding the wound
Only permits it to grow

A pacifist
Conflict avoidant
To the point where it starts fights

Bottling self-loathing
Keeping it warm
The heat off your head incubates it

Every day
Running a rut in my mind

Every day
Slowly going blind

Every day
Scratching at the sore

Every day
Hearing things I can't ignore
merkalos666
Metal Pagan
Join date: Jul 2005
85 IQ
#2
I really love the uses of the words incubates and concocted in here. The flow of this song and the repetition of Every day works wonderfully. Very good job!
Sjharral
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2011
23 IQ
#3
I really like this too! If this was a song I'd probably play it.