jdenmo
UnBanned
Join date: Jul 2012
70 IQ
#2
i liked the muting of the frets at the beginning. its also a nice little riff you got there and the way the voice came in with a haunting sound was pretty good. i really like the riff , its pretty catchy and it really carries the song. when the timing changes around 0:40 you did a good job but i think drums and bass would really help it and make the transition smoother. keep up the good stuff

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link55588
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2009
60 IQ
#3
yes yes, thats what i was thinking too! im also playing around with the last part of the "suffering" part when the lyrics change from the usual ones, i might do a key change or something there, Thanks. Ill check yours out