Hi, I'm jay. I write shit.

The original rhythm guitar for this was made years ago as a gag with british-sounding lyrics. I remembered it a few days ago and decided to try and make a full song out of it for kicks, tell me what ya think.


Everything is done by me, drums are made on a drum machine. Also, try and ignore the crappy mixing/mastering, I know I suck at it lol. Just wanted to get the basic idea across.

Leave a comment and I'll be sure to check out some of your work as well! Feel free to check out the studio-recorded song as well, if interested.
I really like the rhythm of the song in general and the vocals fit in very well. love the ending with the new parts added in. Great mix and overall I liked the song. great job