MobiuZ
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#1
Here's a new song ive been working on on the last few days

its gpx / wav , and yes i know a lot of you dont have it so plz just dont reply if you dont have gpx or dont want to listen to the wav file.

Elation

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Elation.gpx
Last edited by MobiuZ at Feb 19, 2013,
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#2
Is it wierd that the lead line sounds vaguely similar to 'In the jungle, the mighty jungle..'


Also, its not great as a song. Solid, but not great. Its like one of those southern country artists that Glenn Beck gets on his show.
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#3
Neat intro. I like the second part that's a little more folky-sounding. Interesting chord choices, they sound nice and fit well. The little guitar lead just before a minute is cool. I like the drums, the beat sounds really nice and fits well. 1:50 feels like it'd be really big when it's actually recorded. The motif that you play throughout gets kind of overused, but I understand that's kind of in the style of it. 4:10 is good, the little breaks are good and the solo fits. Good song, keep it up.
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Guitar0player
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#4
I forgot just how good GP6 sounds...I need it badly.

The intro sounds quite nice, very melodic. Not too complicated yet not to banal.

Oddly enough sounds like something out of a Japanese fantasy adventure game.

I still cant see what's stoner metal about it though.


The song has very nice dynamics, You put a lot of effort into this didnt you?


Nice dude, very nice! 9/10 The outro sounds quite epic too!
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MobiuZ
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#5
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I forgot just how good GP6 sounds...I need it badly.

The intro sounds quite nice, very melodic. Not too complicated yet not to banal.

Oddly enough sounds like something out of a Japanese fantasy adventure game.

I still cant see what's stoner metal about it though.


The song has very nice dynamics, You put a lot of effort into this didnt you?


Nice dude, very nice! 9/10 The outro sounds quite epic too!


thx man , and strange thing is i didnt take long at all to write this song , maybe about a week max , wich for me is not long.

i might change it up here and there it bit though especisally the middle part with the verse-chorus-verse-chorus part.
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#6
Firstly, that was hella tight.

I really liked the drums throughout it made me realized how much I suck at writing them.
The dynamics and lead parts were pretty stellar other than the main theme seemed to repeat maybe a bit too much but that really wouldn't be noticed if there was vocals involved.

Great song, and thanks for the crit.