Hi guys. I've been playing the guitar for almost two years (one year of acoustic, one year of electric), and I just learned this solo a while ago. I want to know what you guys think and give me some advice. Thanks, guys!

My Equipment:
Jackson JS32 Rhoads (Hard Rock and Heavy Metal)
Fender Squier (Anything BUT Hard Rock and Heavy Metal)
Fender Frontman 25r

I know... it sucks.