#1
Just finished writing this last night, like the title says I'll C4C!

Thanks!
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#2
Sounds like what my mum listens to on her contemporary christian worship radio stations.
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#3
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Sounds like what my mum listens to on her contemporary christian worship radio stations.


can't you just give real feedback instead of being condescending and basically shitting out verbal diarrea ?

anyway on to the crit

i liked the intro it was pretty ok , the vocal line ( at least i think it was ) was pretty uninteresting imo.

nice transition to the chords after that , building up on what was allready there

after that its just rinse and repeat it seems , i dont think it really works with the gp version but i think with real instruments it would definetly work though.

7/10

Can you crit Elation ?
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#4
I thought it was good. Guitar pro does make it sound a little like something you'd hear in the sims.

It's nice to hear something not metal on here!

good work!
#5
Simple, catchy and very sweet though somewhat melancholic.

I liked it, it's a fantastic pop song. Very well made too.

How long did it take you to write this?
Purple string dampener scrunchy.
#6
Very catchy song! I love it. The intro is a real hum-a-long.

When the acoustic guitar comes in it's just perfect.

As someone before mentioned, it is very melancholic but it's not a bad thing. I hope you were going for that style of sound.

Keep up the good work mate!
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#8
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Thank you for the very detailed crit, you ass. Just go back to the pit.
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Thank you for the very detailed crit, you ass. Just go back to the pit.

I tend to give detailed crits, just whenever I want to. I just found that post so mean it was funny lol.
I could crit this song, but now I won't
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