Hey guys, my friend recorded this song for my band 2 months ago and it was the first time I've done a demo! Still have a ways to go on improving my vocals, but tell me what you think about the song. I'd like some criticism, thank you!

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Dual track the guitars, 100% left and 100% right (two seperate recorded guitar parts). This will thicken out your track a lot! The vocals work well for this style of song.