slap-a-bass
Slapper of the bass
Join date: Oct 2007
1,032 IQ
#1
This is a song my last band used, theres an old version up on my profile with a different chorus and different vocals, another time-sig infested piece with a cool polyrhythym guitar solo (9/8 8/8) give it to me guys, i wanna perfect it

cheers
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Kryptic.gp5
Kryptic.mid
Guitar0player
UG's derby Spike
Join date: Aug 2006
3,174 IQ
#2
Chord progression is nice, the timing seems dodgy at first but grows on you.

The development so far is nice, liked the part when distorted guitars first come in. The first pre chorus and chorus provide nice contrast although in my personal opinion seemed to have ended too abruptly.

The technical part at the end was a nice edition and the coda was nice.

8/10!
Purple string dampener scrunchy.
amonamarthmetal
Registered User
Join date: Aug 2008
1,808 IQ
#3
it was really repetitive until 115 that's when I started to enjoy it.
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xbitmetal
Registered User
Join date: Aug 2009
289 IQ
#4
I enjoyed everything in the song, except solo so I wont crit anything else. Solo was very boring, repeative and not even memorable in anyway. I was going to give 10/10, but solo raped the part so hard it dropped to 9/10. Great work! Well builded basslines, nice progressions and vocals actually fit.
slap-a-bass
Slapper of the bass
Join date: Oct 2007
1,032 IQ
#5
right, i wasnt thinking too much about an intricate solo there but just something to contradict the timing and worked with all the background chords so why not, but thanks for the crit everyone