Betaciao
Betaciao
Join date: Apr 2010
10 IQ
#1
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Betaciao/

First song on my profile. Shoegaze song I thought of when I should have been studying for finals at 4 am lol. Only had time to do verse and chorus, gonna jam it out and make it better. Already have a great progression I want to add onto the next section of the song.

Lemme know what you think. And if you leave somethin constructive, I'll do the same for your work if you just post a link to it in the comments
RCAlbright
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2008
82 IQ
#2
It definitely has that shoegaze feel to it. You've got something good here! When/if you record the bass track, if you haven't already, you might want to experiment with basslines that don't follow the guitar; something that gives the song a stronger sense of motion? I'm not sure how to explain it. I think something different would add a nice bit of variety though. I think heavily reverb-ed vocals would be cool with it too. Do what feels right though!

I've got a rough instrumental here, if you don't don't mind giving it a listen.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1594179