I listened all the way through. I like it, your voice really fits this kind of music. The chord progression gets kind of repetitive towards the end, could've perhaps thrown in some varations. I also think some simple harmonizing on the chorus parts would've sounded cool.

Also the low parts of the vocals don't quite cut through. Hard to do anything about it with just 1 mic, but perhaps move mic a bit or play the guitar a bit more lightly. All in all a nice cover, all the things I mentioned are just very minor things.

Yeah, I did this on a short notice so I just used my room mic :p kinda lazy! I could spice it up by some more interesting chords and an extra vocal doing harmony, thanks for the input!