#1
This is the latest song from my band Bind the Strongman. The recording quality on the instrumentals are not the greatest, but the vocals are okay. Let me know what you guys think. If I have time, I will C4C upon request.

The song is kind of a weird mix of some thrash metal and industrial metal with some various other stuff thrown in.

https://soundcloud.com/coreyculler/show-me
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#2
Thanks for the crit on my song!
First thing i notice is that guitars are a bit muddy.
Vocal recording quality is good-> I LOVE THE DEATH GROWLS! vocals remind me of classic In Flames which is awesome. Not really digging the cleans though, especially the melodic cleans near the end.
Overall, songwriting and growls are awesome, recording quality and clean vox can be improved.
Looking forward to hearing more!
#3
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Thanks for the crit on my song!
First thing i notice is that guitars are a bit muddy.
Vocal recording quality is good-> I LOVE THE DEATH GROWLS! vocals remind me of classic In Flames which is awesome. Not really digging the cleans though, especially the melodic cleans near the end.
Overall, songwriting and growls are awesome, recording quality and clean vox can be improved.
Looking forward to hearing more!


In Flames is a big influence on me and one of my favorite bands, for the growls I aim for an old In Flames or Scar Symmetry type of growl. Christian Alvestom is one of my favorite vocalists and he is also one of my biggest vocal influences. The clean section near the end was double tracked and the second track was off so it was kind of weird. I removed it and fattened it up without double tracking as much as I could. As far as the guitars go I already know they are muddy, as I did not have any part of mixing the instruments. I was just given the mp3 and told to put vocals to it lol
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