#1
Tell me what you think - C4C


You said you're just one in the crowd
But your laughter is way too loud
You filled the darkest room with light

Your life has complicated you
But you know just what to do
The light you give is not in you

Hold your head up high
And this pain will die
Somehow, somewhere, just try
You're living in the dark
Where no one can see your tears
But hold your head up high

Can you tell me that I'm wrong?
Don't keep your broken heart too long
Deep inside you growing strong

Look beyond your life today
Can you see yourself this way
When the wintercold is gone

Hold your head up high
And this pain will die
Somehow, somewhere, just try
You're living in the dark
Where no one can see your tears
But hold your head up high
#3
Hey, I just commented on another song of yours hehe
So about this song - I really like the message and some of the lines (mostly verses 1&2)
After reading it it does feel like something missing tho - maybe another verse? or changing some of the lines.
It just feels to me like it should have a very strong message and meaning but it doesn't completely come across.

Sasha