fenderlespaul15
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2013
159 IQ
#1
this is a quick sample of a song im writing about "hipsters" today (the kind that wears high tops and elite socks and listens to rap music) and wondering if it might offend real hipsters, or maybe even some other people groups that its not supposed to...


clique for fags
toss me into your heard of sheep
burn me alive if thats the fad

Im nobody
but thats funny cause im me
your nobody
hipster nation your a lie
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ChemicalFire
King of Bacon Pancakes
Join date: Oct 2007
5,774 IQ
#2
Remove the word fags.

Then it'll be fine.

Not because it's too offensive per-say, but because it makes you sound like an immature douchebag to use "faggot" or any of it's derivatives as a derogatory term.
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