#1
Hi all

This is the first time i post something here, so i thought to give you a look at my lyrics i wrote.

I have been writing more songs, but for me they where not what i was looking for.
So for the first time i have some lyrics that i realy like.
So as i can have your opinion for them.

I play guitar for 7 years, and i sing whit music most of the time, but i am not so good at it i think :p
But still i like to write lyrics :p
I listen metal like machine head, trivium, etc... i have a varied style of metal.

So i hope you can give me some advise and your opinions ( i have no music for it yet :p)

Back to reverse and back


Admirable times will be.
Negative, hope,
Affirm you want.
Be cautious, cherish, admire.
Because it won't last long.
Can do what you want,
Can’t stop from collapsing.
Desires you feel, go back.
Back to the present of when,
To grasp, forget it, let’s go.

That’s the hunger, to rewind,
Behind all of this.
But can't, nothing is ever near the past.
Take it, stay breathing,
It will at no time, come once more.
The blank pages are a fact.


You feel, you like,
It is never coming back.
Try, feel, want,
As hard as you can.
The feeling of failure,
Is hard, unbearable.
But it is never coming back.


The moments raped with pain,
Will recognize it,
Struggle to get beyond.
Will be at rest,
Nothing as previous.
The soreness of antiquity,
It’s constantly,
Don’t keep your thoughts to it.

That’s the hunger to go behind,
Behind all of it.
But can't, nothing is ever near the past.
Take it, stay breathing,
It will at no time, come once more.
The blank pages are a fact, forever.


You feel, you like,
It is never coming back.
Try, feel, want,
As hard as you can.
The feeling of failure,
Is hard, unbearable.
But it is never coming back, ever


Presented times becomes past,
Sharpened as before.
Good becomes great.
Thirst of the ended,
Longing for the next.
There is no finish,
It never freezes.

Removed, tormented, torture,
Ended agony.
Never forget it,
Never go behind.
Stage, remaining behind,
Activate the coming, pinch new pleasure.
Perception of rebirth,
Like emptiness in the dark.

That’s the hunger to go behind,
Behind all of it.
But can't, nothing is ever near the past.
Take it, stay breathing,
It will at no time, come once more.
The blank pages are a fact, forever.


You feel, you like,
It is never coming back.
Try, feel, want,
As hard as you can.
The feeling of failure,
Is hard, unbearable.
But it is never coming back.


You feel, you like,
It is never coming back.
Try, feel, want,
As hard as you can.
The feeling of failure,
Is hard, unbearable.
But it is never coming back, ever

Some edit: i didn't say anything about where the lyrics are about.

So it is about at some point in your live, you feel your live is perfect.
But nothing stays the same, everything change.
Maybe not in the bad way, but still not the same as before.
So you hope that it becomes back, what it was before, but you can't hope that, everything change and nothing stays the same.

So don't hope for the past and accept how it is after it changes.

hope this helps to understand
Last edited by skoezi at Apr 5, 2013,
#3
Quote by sorryatbest
that's pretty awesome. i can't wait to hear it with some music.


i really like to do that, but i can't sing so i don't know how i get the lyrics with some music :p