seventh_angel
So-Called New-Age(d) Poet
Join date: Aug 2007
3,144 IQ
#1
We bought a tandem on black Friday,
paid for it with uncertainty
and received trust as change. Since we
built a shed with our bare hands
and everyone got disgusted
of our callused palms, we had to hold
our scars with fingers intertwined
and self-teach our way across familiar pine
trees; falling together on splinters
and spending the night experimenting
with ligatures. Tumble by tumble,
we ended up pedaling in sync,

but now I’m going downhill
and you’ve cut both brake lines.
treborillusion
UG Fanatic
Join date: May 2009
3,126 IQ
#2
Tandem Style
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look nigga, if you're chillin with 5 bros and 2 hos, you're gonna wanna pay attention to all of em equally. not moon over the hos forever and laugh at every shitty thing they say and just stare at them all night, like some of my mates do.
shanna23
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2013
11 IQ
#3
This begins strong- I like that you built it with your hands. You're going along and taking things in stride. Very good, keep moving forward.
smartalecG94
Just my Bronze showing
Join date: Feb 2011
183 IQ
#6
More later, but for now, it's brake not break in this case. But that's just me being negative and silly.


Also, what piece of yours did I black dot? It seems to have disappeared :s
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That's some nice hair you've got there.


I'm watching you.


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If I was a rich man in 17th century Britain, I'd totally adopt Alec and make him my heir.

People say I tan easily, but that's just my Bronze showing through.