Everything sounds/looks great. I just can't get into the vocals when Im looking at the lyrics. It just seems like random quotes. Maybe that's the theme if the story is supposed to be coming from a Drone's point of view? I know that's how the genre is, but when I close my eyes and listen to it I can get into it.

Other than that, you got solid stuff there!
Gear List

Jackson KingV
Oscar Schmitt OE30
Orange Rockerverb 50
Marshall Mode Four
Marshall 1960 412B

Ampeg SVT4Pro
Ampeg 8x10 Cab

Gas List
Gibson Firebird