Everything sounds/looks great. I just can't get into the vocals when Im looking at the lyrics. It just seems like random quotes. Maybe that's the theme if the story is supposed to be coming from a Drone's point of view? I know that's how the genre is, but when I close my eyes and listen to it I can get into it.

Other than that, you got solid stuff there!
Gear List

Gibson Les Paul Standard
Jackson KingV
Oscar Schmitt OE30

Orange Rockerverb 50
Marshall Mode Four

Gas List
Gibson Firebird