I really liked your voice man. If I could make one small suggestion, it sounds like you are pushing too hard for the rock-vocal sound to your voice. I think it would sound a lot more natural and unique if you dialed back just slightly on that aspect but kept a confident and smooth tone. I like where you go with the song melody-wise though, and nice work keeping the tempo hitting the guitar like that. Here's a link to my band Valley Haze, we play mellow acoustic music

Delicious acoustics. Your voice surprised me. It's really awesome with lots of emotion, though, as mikemellen94 said, you might be pushing your voice a little too hard which makes your singing sound strained at times. Easy and simple listening, which I'm sure would melt any heart of a woman. I'm not one though, so I can't speak too much of that.

Great song, and thanks for the feedback!
You have a great set of lungs on you, something I definitely envy! Liked the guitar style and rhythmic tapping, hard to keep that consistent. Lyrical melody puts me in a good mood as well, nice work!

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