doubtfulsalmon
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Join date: Jan 2011
10 IQ
#1
a woman of water splashed, airless, turbid in the river.

eel kinked its tail
question mark like
broadsheet black,
it dragged her out
and punctuated.
unctuous

she gasped fish
she trembled anguish.

insulted, eel rasped person:

"sticking hooks in their mouths doesn't hurt them?"

parched, she wept and breathed children

astonished, eel did nothing.
Last edited by doubtfulsalmon at May 6, 2013,
culex-knight
mon titre d'utilisateur
Join date: Jun 2004
30 IQ
#2
its* possibly.

I like this.
マリ「しあわっせはーあるいってこないだーからあるいってゆっくんだねーん 
いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ
 さーんぽすすんでにっほさっがるー 
じーんせいはっわんつー!ぱんち・・・


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