The timing is a bit off here and there on the opening lick, you should metronome it up and perfect it! Sounds pretty good though. The palm muting sounds a little muddy but it's probably your tone. Your guitar also sound a little bit out of tune. Seems like you really loosened up towards the end too. Good stuff man, keep on practicing!

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=31473017#post31473017