SilverDolphin
The Ghost Passenger
Join date: Mar 2011
468 IQ
#2
The intro perfectly set the atmosphere. The drum beats were nice and I liked the slight syncopated feel. I noticed some clipping with high notes.
I felt like I was watching two people having a conversation while sitting on a bench by a lake.
I can't hear anything wrong with this. It's just perfect. I really don't have anything to criticize. Great job! This was pleasant to listen to.
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Joshua1207
Hipster Jesus
Join date: Mar 2009
1,804 IQ
#4
I like the intro, very soundtrack-y. Kind of has a The Mercury Program vibe to it. Kind of feels like its building up to something the entire time but doesn't reach that point, but if you put this on an album I think it'd make for a great interlude to the second half of it or something. I like it though, simple yet effective.

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herby190
Banned
Join date: Mar 2008
7,674 IQ
#5
Thanks not only for the crit, but for introducing me to The Mercury Program... if I haven't made it painfully obvious already, I love Post-Rock.