Sounds totally like Tool. That's cool, but many parts seem to be a bit repetitive for me. Your main riff is played too often without a real variation. Try adding some variety and the song should be pretty good!
I'm with Zaqq. the riffs themselves are really cool and sound like Tool (i love Tool, so you won me over on that part ) but its terribly repetitive. ill be honest, i skipped half of it because the other half was the same, and i already heard it. since its incredibly repetitive, yet has a lot of potential, ill give it a 7/10. in the meantime, could you also tell me what you think of my tab? i know it has a weird name, but theres a story behind it involving me and an a singer to one of my past bands
Whatever Happened To Robot Jones-.gp5