ok well the lighting is really bad in your video and blurry and grainy. try having the light in front of you. your vocals seem off and muddy, practice your growls and screams so that they clear up. be hydrated. cause that's hell on the vocal chords. the quiet part is to quiet. some parts sound good some just sound like mud tho. keep up the practice.

c4c https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=31630070#post31630070
Thanks for the constructive criticism, it's so hard to practice when i have people in the house that don't like your music v.v, but i appreciate the comment, the cam is bad to begin with, i seriously gotta get a good one.