There's a larger amount of good work here. I think the lead work is a little muddy/sloppy around the one minnute mark. The vocals are whack. The echo/reverb is way to much, way to much. The music is good enough to be just an instrumental in my opinion. The mix sounds good, but again the vocals need work.

I can appreciate your work here, your just missing the vocals and its a damn good cover.

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