pAWNlol
master of the diddly-doo
Join date: Sep 2012
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#1
Started working on this yesterday. so, with the exception of the synth part in the beginning, this is only 2 days old

this is NOT finished, so dont expect more than just an intro and the first verse. regardless, i still think this is turning out fantastically

Edit: i finished the song, and its totally epic just make sure to turn the reverb up on the harpsichord, and the solo guitar since exporting as gp5 ****s with the reverb levels lol
Attachments:
New project.gp5
The true-self's only friend complete.gp5.zip
Last edited by pAWNlol at Aug 17, 2013,
tritao
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Join date: Apr 2011
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#2
The intro seems a bit unnecessarily long, but once the guitars kick in, wow, pretty epic.
Kafiolet
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Join date: Aug 2009
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#3
Loved the riffs ! Especially the first one even if it is the simpliest one, it is really kickass
pAWNlol
master of the diddly-doo
Join date: Sep 2012
3,080 IQ
#6
I should have mentioned that ive relly been getting into tesseract lol the intro was inspired by "proxy" also, ive added a lot more to it if you guys would like to check it out. just make sure the reverb level for the harpsichord is all the way up. it keeps resetting back to zero for some reason

Edit: btw, thanks for the positive feedback guys!
Attachments:
New project.gp5
Last edited by pAWNlol at Jul 26, 2013,
pAWNlol
master of the diddly-doo
Join date: Sep 2012
3,080 IQ
#7
at the risk of whats probably bumping, this song is fully complete guys so please check it out now! ill return the favor
Drapte
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#8
Bar 33 - 48 would go well with some nice melodic singing. Bar 49 is pretty cool, I like your style it really chills me out. Next section works nice too.

Bar 66 - You have my attention, this is really groovy however I think you should make it repeat on bar 70 rather then keep it going. Nice chorus tho, and the "Short interlude" Is chill too.

Bar 87 is chill and what follows works with the track nicely.

Bar 115 I reckon would be sweet for like, some faded out hardcore yells if you know what I mean. Kinda backgroundy recorded with a room mic.

Bar 157 is djenty as **** I like it a lot. and then bar 165 is ****ing perfect

Bar 192 - 195 would be nice as **** with a lot of delay on the solo.

Nice bit of shred after it too

Next bit bores me a bit, I'd cut it and end the track on bar 204.

Overall well done man another nice track
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pAWNlol
master of the diddly-doo
Join date: Sep 2012
3,080 IQ
#9
Quote by Drapte
Bar 33 - 48 would go well with some nice melodic singing. Bar 49 is pretty cool, I like your style it really chills me out. Next section works nice too.

Bar 66 - You have my attention, this is really groovy however I think you should make it repeat on bar 70 rather then keep it going. Nice chorus tho, and the "Short interlude" Is chill too.

Bar 87 is chill and what follows works with the track nicely.

Bar 115 I reckon would be sweet for like, some faded out hardcore yells if you know what I mean. Kinda backgroundy recorded with a room mic.

Bar 157 is djenty as **** I like it a lot. and then bar 165 is ****ing perfect

Bar 192 - 195 would be nice as **** with a lot of delay on the solo.

Nice bit of shred after it too

Next bit bores me a bit, I'd cut it and end the track on bar 204.

Overall well done man another nice track

thanks, but wait, the ending bores you???

i could understand the clean break, and maybe the buildup, but even the ending solo was boring to you?