SubwayToVenus
Registered User
Join date: May 2009
80 IQ
#1
let it all work out, let it keep your tongue discipline
let it start on slow, may your smile seep within.
honey i knew i loved you before i even met you -
those stars above you, they were meant to
shine inside the chasms that we can't ignore.
high school years passed, and college once more;
there were things that neither lectures nor age could implore -
love can only reach those who reach for it, and so it goes.
here, My Dear, here it is
Last edited by SubwayToVenus at Aug 2, 2013,
Mr.Pink101
Ribbed for her pleasure
Join date: Feb 2008
142 IQ
#3
I've really, really missed rhyming schemes. Eloquent, simple, beautiful, it's been a long time since I've read rhymes that didn't sound forced and cheesy. Not a clue what the title means though..
Music is an art form that celebrates potential. So long as you're looking for it, you'll always find it.
culex-knight
mon titre d'utilisateur
Join date: Jun 2004
30 IQ
#4
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マリ「しあわっせはーあるいってこないだーからあるいってゆっくんだねーん 
いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ
 さーんぽすすんでにっほさっがるー 
じーんせいはっわんつー!ぱんち・・・


"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching

vintage x metal
Brown-Thighed Girl
Join date: Sep 2006
40 IQ
#5
this is calm. it reads your sweetness just as well. I'll be happy to see where you go
Quote by Arthur Curry
it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist




e-married to
theguitarist
minterman22
tateandlyle
& alaskan_ninja

SubwayToVenus
Registered User
Join date: May 2009
80 IQ
#6
thanks everyone for the kind words. and thanks for the wotw, i appreciate it
here, My Dear, here it is