left & leaving
Join date: Mar 2006
140 IQ
you wake me
your voice a warm summer storm
keeping pace with the dreams
i never asked for and could not believe
black blood still in my teeth
as you shake the nettles from my hair
with painted white lightning
underneath your eyes.
in some forgotten language
we now remember how to speak -
you tell me nothing leaves and no one dies;
but somehow the truth still is a lie
and even if you never woke me at all
that still keeps me up at night.
vintage x metal
Brown-Thighed Girl
Join date: Sep 2006
40 IQ
hey stranger. nice to see you back.

this could be even longer, especially with the rhyme scheme
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it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist

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& alaskan_ninja

Registered User
Join date: Nov 2012
66 IQ
I tried playing this out in my head (Though I probably played it wrong) and the lyrics work out very well. Nice work!