#1
Can I lift you up?
Can I remove the shadows pouring the acid rain?
Acid pain, when trust fades away
Leavin’ you to believe we’re all the same

I don’t wanna be the one reinforcing the bitter lies,
The sea of tears flowin’ through your eyes
Can I heal your wounds and watch a new dawn arise
That sets your soul in bloom

Hesitant, so resistant
Don’t wanna walk into a heartbreak phenomenon
But I reassure you there’s nothing more
That I would rather do than treat you with a cure

Let me wash away your sorrow, replacing your regrets
With utopian days you won’t ever forget
In pursuit of tomorrow; reach out for these honest hands
Deep into the unknown

Darkness overcome by light
Unconditioned love within our sight
Transcend the galaxies, to a place where it’s all right
A place where you can breathe

And I know, I know you’ve heard it all before
Is this solely for myself or what you’re truly looking for?
And I know, this is a trial I will fight to endure
For your eternal harmony, forevermore
Forevermore
#2
Wow. That is really good. Great job.
They say when you talk to God it's prayer, but when God talks to you it's schizophrenia.
#3
This is touching. A good piece. Has a mixture of emotion and visuals. Very good. 4.5/5 COuld you take a look at mine and see what you think. THe Pale and Bleed For Me.