jld8111
underachieving
Join date: May 2008
234 IQ
#1
Just a little instrumental thing I've been working on. All comments or criticism welcome
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Leather.gp5
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Craziork
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2013
575 IQ
#2
It starts weak but it grows to something good. The solo is very nice but you repeat a bit too much your main riff for a progressive song. Anyway it was good!
21Fretter
Tab Contributor
Join date: Jul 2007
414 IQ
#3
I liked basically all the riffs but the structure could worked, maybe the drums specifically. Constantly intense almost.
Zaqq
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2011
1,014 IQ
#4
I liked basically all the riffs but the structure could worked

This. Good riffs, but they are repeated too often. And the drums are weird.
Erra93
erriuyai
Join date: Nov 2009
1,682 IQ
#5
Loved all the riffs! While I do agree on the intensity, I haven't made up my mind yet if it's a bad thing or not.
pAWNlol
master of the diddly-doo
Join date: Sep 2012
2,990 IQ
#6
this definitely sounds cool, but i agree with craziork; it is pretty repetitive. otherwise, i really dont have much to complain about. i liked the bass a lot
jld8111
underachieving
Join date: May 2008
234 IQ
#7
Noted about the repetition. I noticed that myself but I liked it sort of. And yeah the drums are intense like the whole time because I felt like the guitar was really melody focused so I wanted the drums and bass to drive the song. Thanks for listening.
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From Your Grave
bampersand
Join date: Jan 2010
604 IQ
#8
I felt like that main riff should have been played once, it ended perfectly with bar 8, and from there everything should have kicked in but it should have been a different riff. Or, just delete the first 9 bars, then change the riff at 18. At 61 is the first time it should repeat again. It's a great riff don't get me wrong, but progressive songs are almost never driven with one riff.

the bass at 93 is really good.