crazycory94
i like potatoes
Join date: Mar 2010
40 IQ
#1
http://youtu.be/uHIQfjwfhzY

i did a rock cover of this a few weeks ago but deleted it because after watching it again, I wasn't happy with it. Hopefully this on is different

So if you want, tell me what you think here or on the youtube page. If you like it, sub and leave a link to yours and I'll do the same
Oh hey, I didn't see you there
Last edited by crazycory94 at Oct 25, 2013,
Asecretchord
Ph.D in Drinking Milk
Join date: Oct 2012
363 IQ
#2
My personal opinion is that voice has potential. Your vowels need some work, and I would sing a half step higher, I would think that would make it sound better. The guitar playing was crisp and clean, so nice job on that. I would consider a vocal teacher, but your voice could have a soulful voice. Another thing I would work on is your breathing. It sounded like you were running out of air really fast, and a vocal teacher could help that. Right now it needs come work, but I hear potential in that voice.