Tyson2011
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2010
212 IQ
#2
a bit flat at times, and a lot of spread vowels... but overall not bad. I'm not a fan of breathy unsupported vocals, but he's decent at what he does.

As far as the songwriting goes, its really easy listening, which isn't necessarily bad...but I definitely lost interest quickly. I'd recommend doing something a little "risky" somewhere, maybe throw in some "dissonant" harmonies to draw the ear in and out?
Pastafarian96
Piano nerd for the ages
Join date: Dec 2013
2,456 IQ
#3
It was alright, but I have to agree with Tyson, it is a bit flat at some points and ever so slightly repetitive. Other than that, good.