Pretty good.

A couple things I noticed were that you need to reign in the vibrato, and that to my ears it sounds like you're clenching the high notes in your upper chest area.

Do you feel tightness in your upper chest when you go for the high notes? I used to do that exact same thing.

It was a good cover though man.

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