Random88
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Join date: Mar 2007
139 IQ
#1
Hi, would appreciate all/any feedback on this. It was put together very roughly/quickly so I'm not bothered about the quality of the recording at the moment, but any feedback on the actual 'content' would be great.

https://soundcloud.com/iliketomaketunes/this-song-i-wrote

Cheers!
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mattjamesrenn
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Join date: Oct 2013
464 IQ
#2
Hey dude, I have to say that was an enjoyable listen. I liked the atmosphere it created, was almost hypnotic like listening to post rock/metal or something like Tool but still being its own beast.
As far as feedback goes there were a couple of fuzzed notes but you prob know that and is pretty irrelevant, also I like a little imperfection anyway.
I don’t like to tell people that I would arrange things slightly different like for eg, take a break after this part, repeat this part blah blah as it is your vision or ‘art’.
Anyways will follow you on SC so get some more stuff down so I can enjoy more (if you want).
Random88
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Join date: Mar 2007
139 IQ
#3
Thanks man, appreciated. Feel free to follow, trying to put a few more things together so I'll put some more stuff up soon
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aaron aardvark
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Join date: Mar 2010
4,986 IQ
#4
Random88,
Audio quality is not bad, pretty good actually (except for a few extraneous noises & abrupt ending). Most of the guitar playing is good, though could be tighter at times. I like the riffs. I think some drums & bass should kick in at some point. A few good vocals would be nice. Perhaps you could review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1637670