#1
Hey everyone, I rarely post anymore, just thought I'd show something I've been working on recently.


EDIT: Updated song down below.
Poop.


Yes, poop.
Last edited by MattAnderson111 at Oct 6, 2012,
#2
Resist the urge to half time at bar 24, and you've got a good song on your hands.
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#3
Thanks man, It's more of a ghost note in between the breaks, with an accentuation on the snare for half time, I really can't think of a better way to do that part though.
Poop.


Yes, poop.
#4
You're one of the few people who is still writing metalcore but keeping it fresh. Really enjoyed that, wouldn't change a thing.
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#6
Thought it lost it's way towards the end but otherwise superb. Bit messy at times with all the ringing parts, maybe make the cleans to tidy it up? Tapped lead was very nice.
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