greyeyedfire
5c3n3 p0w3r
Join date: Nov 2008
1,545 IQ
#1


If any mods feel this doesn't qualify as writing, feel free to remove it.
Last edited by greyeyedfire at Oct 4, 2012,
whywefight
~I'm not fuckin around~
Join date: Dec 2010
1,765 IQ
#2
403. That’s an error.

Your client does not have permission to get URL /p0NQRZ11n64J4EL1mbng74tswS4Qbi5shr-PFiN0S5_PatW0XU-S5bYQ64zvZ_liUt-6ic5siOo from this server. (Client IP address: 137.216.85.205)

Forbidden That’s all we know.


That's the error I got.
seventh_angel
So-Called New-Age(d) Poet
Join date: Aug 2007
3,168 IQ
#4
Hey, you posted something !

Somehow, this didn't work for me. You always wrap things up quickly with simple thoughts, but this was... too simple. It's just a feeling so common that doesn't work if put on paper so bluntly.

Now what I wanted to know is the purpose of the flower. Is it a metaphor ? Maybe it symbolizes that you're just waiting to bloom in a sunny day or something. I don't know; I'm not very good at symbolisms ( and I'm not a fan of them either, especially in movies ). But could you tell what it means ? Because it does seem to have its purpose.

It's good to see you post, even though I was not a fan of this.
Always-Idle
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2012
21 IQ
#5
I like it's simplicity. I think that being able to decipher and sum up your thoughts like that is wonderful skill.