#1
well,it is one of my last works. i know it have a lot of problem with the transitions. I hope you can give me some advices, guys. it will be recorded for the new album of my one-man band project.Use the RSE )))

p.s. sorry for my english )))
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Dolor Aeternum.gp5
Dolor Aeternum.mid
Last edited by Rossielle at Dec 10, 2012,
#2
Very nice, smooth and majestic chord progressions, nicely complimenting guitar and bass lines. The second chord in the intro needs a little fleshing out, the melodic connection isn't quite there yet. The second verse is a better example of how it works. I can imagine this having a massive reverby production, but that'd work well with the song...
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#3
Tbh, I had to increase the tempo to 120 just to listen to it. Wayyyy too long and drawn out for my ADD ass. But, when I did speed it up, I really enjoyed it. The melodic concepts are awesome. The slow nature of it is not for me, but you did a really good job man.
#4
Quote by EpiExplorer
Very nice, smooth and majestic chord progressions, nicely complimenting guitar and bass lines. The second chord in the intro needs a little fleshing out, the melodic connection isn't quite there yet. The second verse is a better example of how it works. I can imagine this having a massive reverby production, but that'd work well with the song...



thanx man. i hope the next time i'll do my wotk better than this time ))
#5
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Tbh, I had to increase the tempo to 120 just to listen to it. Wayyyy too long and drawn out for my ADD ass. But, when I did speed it up, I really enjoyed it. The melodic concepts are awesome. The slow nature of it is not for me, but you did a really good job man.



this work it's really slow, but i tried to fill it with a lot of feelings . hope the other works will be better )))
#6
Oh, wow... Really majestic. Love the jazz-y and classical feel to the chord progressions. Would love to hear this recorded!
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#8
Where do you want the soprano part?
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