This I like. Tight guitar playing, nice voice. You should do a studio recording on this, would be great with some more production on it. Also towards the end I waited for it to heat up a bit if you know what I mean.

If you'd like to listen to my latest song, I'd love to get some feedback too. https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?goto=lastpost&t=1586427
Last edited by Jabbe at Feb 5, 2013,
It's really good! but I felt like your voice would fit better in a rockband, instead of as a singer/songwriter, you would be able to go more all out with your voice if you know what I mean :-)
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Thankyou! Id like the rock band idea too but i have a hard time with vocals and people tell me to belt it out more but then i feel restrained. Just gotta keep working at it i suppose.
Nice. I liked it. I agree that I was expecting it to rock out at the end.