Lacunallica
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Join date: Oct 2009
457 IQ
#1
Here's something I've been working on for the past 2 odd hours.


Please note I haven't added the solos yet, as solos aren't my strong point.


Criticism welcome.

Thanks


C4c?
Attachments:
BlardyBlah2 - Copy.zip
Last edited by Lacunallica at Apr 12, 2013,
Ometh
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Join date: Oct 2009
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#2
C4c if I like the song or if I would like you to? Because if i's the first instange that's just silly.
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Lacunallica
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Join date: Oct 2009
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#3
Sorry if there was confusion.

I just edited it to remove that part. Haha.
Zaqq
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#4
Not bad, some riffs are pretty cool. However, as much I like long songs, the intro looks too long for me. The drumming is pretty weird at bars 84-108. The "one guitar plays a long E5 chord and the second one plays a riff" thing sounds not so good, especially being used for 2 or 3 times in the intro.

Bars 53-65 - a bit pointless bass-only part, it's too long.
Bars 112-120 - I really like the verse riff! 149-157 - cool bass riff, but the part is a bit too long.

Overall, a really nice result for 2 hours of work! It'll took me forever to come with something like that
Lacunallica
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Join date: Oct 2009
457 IQ
#5
I was thinking of double tracking it like Mustaine did for the first 2 tracks of So Far So Good So What and Endgame
Ometh
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#6
Quote by Lacunallica
Sorry if there was confusion.

I just edited it to remove that part. Haha.

I was messing with you lol.
Quote by slapsymcdougal
I'm cockblocked regularly by my appearance and personality.