You got a majority of the notes right on cue, except the ending was a little rushed. You've gotta throw some more feeling into it though. The longer notes, especially, need some vibrato.


Play until she breaks up with you.

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You should go like them...even if you don't like them.

overall good job I did notice however that you used your to first two fingers mostly, you need to incorporate your ring and pinky as well. The tone was good, you did play a few parts differently from the original recOrding. All in all good attempt I suggest you work with a metronome slow it down and gradually increase the speed.

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Thanks for the replies guys, I know a have more technique to work on, incorporating my third and fourth fingers and getting vibrato down better, but for only a little more than a year of playing, I don't think I did too bad.

@Big bang theory: Great job on the cover, we do have the same taste in music. Ill be sure to get myself a metronome to help increase my speed